I miss u ............come back soon
by shivali Apr 26, 2008
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Sitting alone in a corner, |
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15 years ago
I like it alot its really deep in nt that many words lovin it
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15 years ago
by jane
Very good.....i like it...5/5......= )
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15 years ago
by Mister 47
Not bad a short one , !! but , if is fair enough , i like free poetry, but you need in it to keep structuring your ryming
free poetry is good ,
but the good ryming one and structured one are the msot one remmbered and they stick in our minds,
your words are beautiful and the metaphores are great ,
jsut , work a little on your lines and edit it -
15 years ago
by Niinaa
Sweet,Short & Simple
your tender touch that makes me cure,
is all what i want for sure!
^ Maybe change too your tender touch is my cure, it is all i want for sure ...
Other than that its a really cute poem
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15 years ago
Thats what everyone is looking for. ny way nice poem=)
