Its all over

by Dustin Walters   Apr 28, 2008


Subtract the outer exterior of me
and see the painful sight to see.
theatre is the core.
facing depression no more.
friendships with agony
I can't be who everyone wants me to be.
Living slowly with sin
Dying quickly, on my face, a grin

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sammerz

    THis poem is really good filled with emotions but very good loved it and how you expressed yourself.
    5/5
    Fabulous Job!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Biya

    AWWW , touching !
    This poem starts from a lovely meaning
    "Subtract the outer exterior of me
    and see the painful sight to see"
    SEE the inner broken soul wow ! amazing thats what I have written a poem on it and I would like to dedicate you a verse of my poem , here it goes ,,,

    Who tries to understand those
    Who laugh with hidden tears like a clown

    And Dustin this sentence of ur poem is also very touching
    "I can't be who everyone wants me to be"
    Lovely
    A vote for u!
    Cheers
    Biya