Red Pain

by Jyoti Rawat   Apr 29, 2008


A lacks of pins punch on my heart
Each pin is full of blood
Every day your memory press each pin
Blood star moving each pin
Light pain stars into my soul
Knocking my mind how much I love u.
But my mind always tries. It would never come
On my face or in my eyes in the form of tears.

My soul is day by day become redder
I painted my face or eyes with white colour
Because I have to show this face to the world
I will never bring tear on face
Because tears become red water

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  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Thats really a deep one with much of sadness, great write

    all the best and take care

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's very sad indeed. In your every poem there's a touch of strong and grief. You've written it well. But very sad.

  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats really good, short strong and powerful, good title choice xxx

  • 15 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    What a poem n so much pain in it......

    Marvellous thought dear friend, it was astounding, Ya sumthings prick hard n harder with time.....

    So nicely composed sad poem..

    Keep it up..

    Best wishes,

    Karan

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