Lost in this world

You did a great job, but believe me . i think that you're intelligent to the point that you can find your way and if you face any troubles. i am ready for help cuz you are not alone

Wow. Very good, scary, meaningful. Great question at the end. Be careful with getting out of poet form 'I am freaked out as a person can be' isn't aesthetically pleasing, but for the meaning of the poem, it might be very fitting. It's all up to you. I really enjoyed this poem...great job!

In sleep we r relaxing our minds n watz eating us will come as a dream sumtimes in a good way otherwise in a bad way....

ya everything is fine in d poem... only thing that looks missing is d dream itself..

But thanks I have it... n itz a very good dream...

TC n no matter wen a writer writes it turns into a poem.... n how much a reader understands out of ur thoughts depends on the reader...

Good one.. keep writing....

Good write...
"Why did this happen
Who is he and where he comes
How did he find me
Is this some sick joke"

^^ i like the way you have asked questions..
the desperation to get answers is visible behing those words..

"Is this world I thought was real
only my dreams at night...? "
^^ liked this line..

overall a nice poem... but i felt something was missing...maybe you could try some other words... Its just a suggestion... I just wrote what I felt.. others may like it.. :)

keep writing..

Great way to describe real events:)