Pain

by trinity   Apr 30, 2008


No one will stop to listen to my tears/
they hold such a story/
they hold the reasons for all my fears/
all the pain and shame/
all the wounds that will never heal/
imagine what i truly feel/
for all the scars that will never show/
that you will never know/
for i hide behind this empty shell/
never to show all the tears that have fell/
the beatings i endured, they will never be known/
for me to open up and that part to be shown/
would open up to many feeling i buried deep/
which i will bring with me until that very awaited long sleep/

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is good, a few errors :

    No one will stop to listens to my tears = listens should be listened xx

    that you will never now = now should be know

    the beatings a endured, they will never be known = a should be i

    wound open up to many feeling i buried deep = wound should be would and feeling should be feelings xx

    fix these little errors and you got a deep painful poem hun xxx