My final let down

by Baby Rainbow   May 1, 2008


They have no idea what they have done
my life may as well just end
i cant carry on like this anymore
I'm supposed to be a good friend
not someone who lets you down
thats all i seem to ever do
but without you i would drown
without me, you would be better off
so this is my final letdown
I'm sure you will understand why
I'm not expecting you to forgive me
just please, let me die

saffie
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  • 16 years ago

    by Kelly

    Aw - i know sometimes i think everyone feels like this it can be really hard trying to be a good friend but i think as long as you care about someone they will sense that and you need to let them decide wether you have let them down or not. Sometimes whatever you have done no matter how little has made all the difference. Well thats my reaction to the poem - i really thought it was great. I like your poems they are straight to the point.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenn

    If this is personal, I am sorry that you have had to experience something like this. I've been experiencing similar things myself and I know how painful it can be to hurt a friend. Thank you for sharing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Aw sad : /
    great flow though
    5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    But without you i would drown

    i feel same , way , but you know , i always think we should always try our best and we will do mistakes , no one is perfect, :)
    but i understadn how you feel

    :)

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Sad, dark, and lovely