A dream easy to steal

by Baby Rainbow   May 1, 2008


I still think of you by the way
its been a while since i seen you
but i think of you everyday
and all the things we used to do

i miss everything about you
i wish we could keep in touch
i guess i wont be seeing you again
i just want you to know i miss you so much

i hope my dream becomes real
then i can stop missing you
but my dream is just a dream easy to steal
so i will just keep quiet, goodbye x

saffie
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  • 15 years ago

    by Death no Faith

    I like this.....

    you got a great deal of talent to deal with....

  • 15 years ago

    by Jenn

    This is so sad, but wonderful. One suggestion, for the line:

    "its been a while since i seen you"

    If you want it to be gramatically correct, you could just change the "i" to "i have" or "i've."

    Great job =]

  • 15 years ago

    by Andrew

    Short and nice... Really like the title, thats very well thought of too. Like the way your words flow. I can relate to this poem one time in my life, very well written.. Keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I miss everything about you
    i wish we could keep in touch
    i guess i wont be seeing you again
    i just want you to know i miss you so much

    i liked that part ,

    exactly what i feel too
    :)

  • 15 years ago

    by neo

    I can really relate. great flow