Spring Canvas (Haiku)

by BrokenREALiTy   May 1, 2008


Winter breeze lingers,
Painting delicate colors,
Across the pale sky.
©20080430 Mindy Huang

[ Haiku -- Follows 5/7/5 Syllable Pattern; Three lines; 17 Syllables total; typically used to write about nature ]
** Still practicing.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Nice haiku here! I love your creativity and your imagination:

    "Winter breeze lingers,"

    Very descriptive and sweet.

    "Painting delicate colors,
    Across the pale sky."

    I like how you used good adjectives and you really did this well. I love how you say the winter breeze paints colors across the sky!! That's so different, and very creative, I really really love this, and please keep writing haiku. Take care!

  • 17 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    Haiku's are very hard to write, in my case anyways. So props to you for that!

    "Winter breeze lingers,"

    I like your imagery in this poem. I can really imagine this. Good work.

    "Painting delicate colors,
    Across the pale sky."

    I love your contrast here, its very good, yet subtle. Good job with this haiku! I could never write one so great job for you! :D You should check out some of my poetry sometime. :D

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