This is an outstanding poem with astromomical imagery and orderly universal flow

"Emits" in the first stanza should be "Emit"

This is great read, so powerful. I like the topic a lot, it is creative. Your choice of words is excellent through the whole piece and descriptions are simply breathtaking. The imagery that you created trapped my mind within completely different world, so vivid. The first stanza can maybe break into two after the "What lies ahead??" line because it would maybe be more effective, but that is just a suggestion.
Overall, you did amazing job with this piece.

Keep writing!

Hey

The title of this poem really intrigued me, i was compelled to read it..... I am so glad i did!

It was great and filled with questions i often ask myself!

Answers hidden in the unknown..
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Fav line!

It was great

5/5

Wow! This poem impressed me. It posses remarkable imagery and your message is truly interesting. You captivated me with this piece, your choice of words is truly creative and it added refreshing tone to the atmosphere of this poem. I admire your ability to put so much power in short piece as this one.
Truly great write, I don't have anything negative to say about this poem, well done!

Excellent poem. written really well. :] 5/5

This was really good.i like the way u set it up..and ur right its the unknown...
good job!
Aly

WOw. awesome poem. :) i love it, so many mysteries yet to be solved and discovered behind what we know. i love it, great great job! :)

Excellent write...simply astounding...

Oh I just loved this! Your words were just captivating luring me into this unknown land which was just wonderful. I felt each word you expressed and I could tell you put a lot of thought in this and it showed. I applaud you in capturing my attention and not letting go until the end where I was left wanting more.

The ending was so puzzling yet amazing. I loved how I had to think while reading this poem to truly understand what you were saying. Well done in creating this wonderful piece. I enjoyed it from beginning to end.

*5/5*

Wow.
I like this.
Its amazing.
Its a really good write,
and you used your words well:]
5/5

I really liked this poem, but I think it could have been a little longer.
Other then that this was pretty good.
I gave it a 5/5
- Maria xx

Lovely poem. 5/5

Beautiful wording to reflect and refract a great universal mystery
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^Mystery still to be unfold. ^

This line doesn't sound quite right..... Mystery yet to unfold....left unfolded...

The rest of the poem was absolutely amazing. Vivid imagery and a very articulate word choice. i love nature poems especially in regards to our mysterious universe. You captured the beauty of the unknown well. Excellent job!

Wow...breathtaking! Your imagery here is just beautiful and the soothing tone is amazing.