Comments : Cosmos

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is an outstanding poem with astromomical imagery and orderly universal flow

  • 14 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    "Emits" in the first stanza should be "Emit"

    This is great read, so powerful. I like the topic a lot, it is creative. Your choice of words is excellent through the whole piece and descriptions are simply breathtaking. The imagery that you created trapped my mind within completely different world, so vivid. The first stanza can maybe break into two after the "What lies ahead??" line because it would maybe be more effective, but that is just a suggestion.
    Overall, you did amazing job with this piece.

    Keep writing!

  • 14 years ago

    by shadowknight


    The title of this poem really intrigued me, i was compelled to read it..... I am so glad i did!

    It was great and filled with questions i often ask myself!

    Answers hidden in the unknown..
    Fav line!

    It was great


  • 14 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow! This poem impressed me. It posses remarkable imagery and your message is truly interesting. You captivated me with this piece, your choice of words is truly creative and it added refreshing tone to the atmosphere of this poem. I admire your ability to put so much power in short piece as this one.
    Truly great write, I don't have anything negative to say about this poem, well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Excellent poem. written really well. :] 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Unamed

    This was really good.i like the way u set it up..and ur right its the unknown...
    good job!

  • 14 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    WOw. awesome poem. :) i love it, so many mysteries yet to be solved and discovered behind what we know. i love it, great great job! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by anurag

    Excellent write...simply astounding...

  • 14 years ago

    by Blissful

    Oh I just loved this! Your words were just captivating luring me into this unknown land which was just wonderful. I felt each word you expressed and I could tell you put a lot of thought in this and it showed. I applaud you in capturing my attention and not letting go until the end where I was left wanting more.

    The ending was so puzzling yet amazing. I loved how I had to think while reading this poem to truly understand what you were saying. Well done in creating this wonderful piece. I enjoyed it from beginning to end.


  • 14 years ago

    by XxWorthlessxX

    I like this.
    Its amazing.
    Its a really good write,
    and you used your words well:]

  • 14 years ago

    by Maria

    I really liked this poem, but I think it could have been a little longer.
    Other then that this was pretty good.
    I gave it a 5/5
    - Maria xx

  • 14 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Lovely poem. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Beautiful wording to reflect and refract a great universal mystery

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    ^Mystery still to be unfold. ^

    This line doesn't sound quite right..... Mystery yet to unfold....left unfolded...

    The rest of the poem was absolutely amazing. Vivid imagery and a very articulate word choice. i love nature poems especially in regards to our mysterious universe. You captured the beauty of the unknown well. Excellent job!

  • 5 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow...breathtaking! Your imagery here is just beautiful and the soothing tone is amazing.