A deeply dark poem that is so well written. The flow was really good and added more depth to your poem. Overall I really enjoyed reading it. Keep it up! 5/5

It is a wonderful and fantastic poem it is like a fantasy

This was a wonderful dark poem. It was written beautifully. I loved the flow it kept me wanting more. Once again great job. 5/5
~Forever Broken~

I know where you are coming from and i can appreciate this poem for that...5.5

Okay,
I like this poem but the only thing i would change would be...

Join me in happy time
Being dead, be it a crime
Dance with me till we hear it chime

I put with in unstead of "Dance me till we hear it chime"
All in all great poem keep it up

WOW That poem was just really eye drawing I wanted to keep reading Your a great write =)

Loved it.
-- aprils conspiracy

Very good poem..once again
good job...xxx

I liked every word u wrote in that poem...yeah really it was fantastic...good job,keep it up:)5/5
Take care and wish u all the best..

Thats really good
it gives me a little bit of the creeps
which means it was written well.
i think you should write a sequel or something.
fantabulastic
!!!!!!
i see talent
i enjoyed this

Lexie

Short dark and powerful. love it.
all your poems are amazing. deep and powerful. i love your writing.

--aprils conspiracy

A great dark poem, short but captivating. Nice word choice, and this was really cool to read. Great work, take care! Keep writing, always and forever....

Love your poem really dark like my life and soul, i know how you feel. I wish I could just die, the only reason I'm still here are for the people who love me. I wish I could sleep an iternity, but know I've even got insomnia.
I you wana chat send me a msg.
Emo love
xoxoxox

Wow...i really like this.

amazing poem.

I quite like this x]

xx

I liked this poem but i cant decide wether the people in it where really dead or only dead inside. i kinda lean more to the latter though

Wow..amazing. nice flow and vivid saddness. I really like this poem. Great job.

victoria

This is fantastic!!! Good Job!!

It was beautifuly written and just fantastic.

Nicely written. i like it.