My Crime & Conviction

by xXxemzxXx   May 3, 2008


Try and try
As hard as i might
No matter what
I still lose the fight

Times i think
Hard to myself
Is it worth it
With all the pain I've felt

I continue on
With my addiction
While the judge and jury
Sentence me to my conviction

Life of shame
Is my punishment
Cutting
Is my crime

I'll never be free try and try
As hard as i might
I know in my heart
I'll continue to lose the fight

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  • 14 years ago

    by Aish

    Very very ood-i think its the best out of the ones ive read in terms of flow and rhythm.

    very sad though :( last stanza was great-however the way i read it, the last line needed one more syllable-maybe "i will continue to lose the fight" i dont know-im probs reading it wrong-anyway-

    another 5

    aish
    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Invited

    Good work- i am sure that light is waiting for you, just persevere you will get there! I loved it and you surely have my vote...5/5

    xchinwex

  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    The light is out there waiting for you, dont give up cos you can and will be free xx keep writing xx

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