Comments : Marriage "A" & "B"

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very well written acrostic poems though A is more common most of us would prefer the B type

  • 15 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Nice. I liked how you contrasted the good and the bad. Very creative. 5.

    Oh, might I add that I have read part of your profile and I quite enjoy the book title..Rhymes from H E L. Laughs* Very creative. ^_^

  • 15 years ago

    by ALEX

    I'm very much a fan of both of these together. How "A" is negative while "B" is positive. Personally, I know nothing about marriage, but I can see from your poems that you need to remember both views. :) I like it very much.

  • 15 years ago

    by Anthony Duvalle

    I really enjoyed the style of this. It's different and I liked it. Plus it gave a general idea and shot emotion even though you used a total of about 18 words. That is skill. Much respect due 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Bugg

    This is great. I'm getting married in a few years and I would love for our marriage to be mostly B, though I'm sure at times it will be A. lol I liked how you contrasted them. Alot of people usually think about marriage as being one or the other and not both. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Until Again

    This was fun. Flip sides, I like it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    What I really like about this poem, is its uniqueness. I don't think I have ever seen anything like this but this is very creative, and I thought it was great! Also, I like how you did a comparison between the positives and negatives of marriage. Good work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Katie

    That's neat! Acrostics are very nice done right. Here it is!