Great job...i like what ur saying here
'Summer heat, scorching
Thermometers escalating,
Drought afflicts the plain,
As plateaus are wacked by the rain'
u have picturised the climatic conditions of plateus very well.
'Nature's wrath befall,
Mounting death-toll,
Supremacy - we can't defeat,
As the ozone depletes.
Reckless deforestation,
Endless commercialization,
Convenience and leisuring,
At the cost of Nature bleeding'
thats exactly whats going on these days. We are polluting our environment even though we know that we r nothing without it! And the deforestation part... i like the flow here!
'Not far is the 'Day',
A time to repay,
Soon we'll enter the list,
Of the species that Extinct..'
I like this part the most! U have xpressed this idea of the future of mankind beautifully!
Good work:)

Not far is the 'Day',
A time to repay, great saying ,

i love this , words,

the hole poem is good , i liekthe rhyming , much good in my mind , i am painist so i cna knwo a little about that ,

great work

True we got give nature some love after what it does for us great poem keep it up.

I love the message of this poem!! The environment is supposed to be our friend!

"Not far is the 'Day',
A time to repay,
Soon we'll enter the list,
Of the species that Extinct.. "
-this is my favorite stanza because one day, if we don't start taking some action, yep...we'll be extinct.

"Reckless deforestation,
Endless commercialization,
Convenience and leisuring,
At the cost of Nature bleeding."
- I love this stanza too, because it's true, we're destroying the world for our own comfort, but what about nature? Why are we forgetting that one day we won't have anything if we don't stop?

Overall, it was an awesome poem, i give it 5/5

Caitlin =]]

Wow...i really really love this poem! you have an extremely strong message here and i hope more people read this poem so they realize the problems that are going on with the enivroment. i have a poem about this also :) very very strong poem. very beautiful and meaningful. i love it :)

This line:
As plateaus are wacked by the rain.

Threw my rhythm off.

Third time I read the poem.
It didn't make sense the first two times.
The third time, I'm like, wow.

It's very creative of you to write something like this.
Although, the words could've been more stronger, as well as the rhythm.

I believe it's pretty well done.

Oooh I liked this. It was kind of a dark nature poem. I felt anger from it.
It is true that the human race betrays mother earth, and soon is the "day" that you stated.
Good job. 3rd stanza was my favorite!
5/5
~Lace

I thought this was actucally quite good. I dont normally read poems like this because they dont hold my attention very well. but I can honestly say this one did. I think the vocab you used in this is really great. I have to say that this is a 5/5 for me because i loved how short it is but you made the emotion in it work. You made brought it to an end at the right time!. anyway enought of my babbling. lol Great Job!!

Lovely job
I usually don't do nature poems
but this one was really cute
I liked the simplicity of it all
the second stanza was my favorite
great job
5/5

The beginning stanza just captured me and I was eager to read on. The words you used like "scorching" and "escalating" were a nice touch to catch my attention. I also enjoyed the title because it lured me in wanting to read more.

The message here was held with such power in your words that I was left blown away. There was meaning and strengthe behind everything you said which made this piece even more of a joy to read. Well done *5/5*

5/5.Excellent flow.Avery catchy start and the last stanza leaves one aghast.Very true and meaningful poem.Keep the great work going.

Not far is the 'Day',
A time to repay,
Soon we'll enter the list,
Of the species that Extinct..

How right you are. We are the most stupid of all creatures!
Well written poem, I hope it will be read by many and make some people wake up...

Take care,

Ingrid

First let me say that I love nature poems and poems that make you think about the wrath we as humans have on our nature surroundings. This piece was a true work of honesty. The feelings conveyed in it are a controlled rage against how we as humans have become so careless. A delightful read and much enjoyed.

There are only a couple of things that in my opinion should be changed in the poem. If I may point those out.....

As plateaus are wacked by the rain.

^^^ I would eliminate the word "the" to have it read ...As plateaus are wacked by rain

Not far is the 'Day',
A time to repay,
Soon we'll enter the list,
Of the species that Extinct..

^^^Eliminate one more "the"and add "become" towards the end, to have it read
"Of species that become extinct"

Reckless deforestation,
Endless commercialization,
Convenience and leisuring,
At the cost of Nature bleeding.

^^^^ This stanza was amazing! It brought the whole poem to poignant reckoning. Nature is bleeding beneath our feet and still we continue the recklessness.

Wonderful poem and very well versed. Loved it.

Wow, i love this poem. and the way you speak of us as a species that will soon be extinct, it makes you think and was written really well. keep it up!