Powerful. Excellent. Lovely. Flowing. Sweet.

I really like the poem you have constucted.
It has lots of emotion and power.

Painful hints have been dropped
Bombing the sky of my existence.
As you move farther and farther away,
I try to close out the distance.
^^^
i really like this stanza
it is extremely beautiful. and has such meaning.

Pretty good poem :) i love it. such awesome emotion and yeah the title could use some work but im sure you'll find one suitable. :)

Frenzied thats a great poem how bout that for a title

This is a good poem. I loved the emotion in it. I was drawn in from the first line. I really liked it.

I also enjoyed this poem.
It was very well written.
Although in some places it could be a bit stronger.
You could try explanding your mind a little bit and adding more description.
Other then that it was an amazing poem. and I really enjoyed the read:)

This piece is powerful and more detailed and well put together considering other poems I have read. However, beneath all it's glory there is room in the poem that can be used to make things more creative and poetic.

I would simply take a look at how the words are used and check for repition. I cannot stand repition even though I know I have some too... =]

-Kaitlyn.

Great poem, the title really got my attention. Its unique

Powerfull foem and great flow 5/5

Yeah the title is fine

u r a great poet!!!

i loved it!..specially the 1st stanza!!!!!!!

Aly

I loved your beginning stanza because it quickly captured my attention and had me wanting to read more. The imagery was flawless and the it all just flowed naturally. Well done *5/5*

The first stanza was great for the opening. And I really thought this was well written:

"Yet the stars refuse to shine,
With you and I under its glow.
The Gods refuse us to be together
For a reason I don't want to know."

That's pretty sad, ya know, that the Gods refuse you to be together. But I could feel the emotion and the sadness as I read these words. Overall, a truly wonderful poem that really proved you can write beautifully! Nice work and keep it up!