Loving someone else

by dianne   May 8, 2008


Loving a person is not just like an easy thing
At first you think its just like that
You just play to it but in the end you will get hurt
But you dont wondering that
You will fall easily
You will be happy with him,
Knowing that he loves you too,
And thinking that youre just playing
But your heart is fallen in love with...
Everyday youre talking to each other
In that time you are fallen in love
But when the time you realize that you love him
You make your relationship serious
But when you realize that its too late,
Because he makes many reason all the times
When you like to have a conversation about your relationship,
He makes many alibis to change the topic
And days passed, without knowing that he is gone
And when hes doing that you get hurt, cry and cry
And trying to forget, everyday that you remember him,
Your mind says that you forget him
But your heart says I STILL LOVE HIM
But now you forget and love again
You learned many things in your past
So this time you will love the person that loves you very much
Not playing with that person but loving him
Like the love that you give in your first love
Because he is the one that deserves your love

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  • 14 years ago

    by dianne

    Thanks for all your comments. i just opened this account of mine. sorry for the super late reply. :(

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Very well done. Truth in everything you've wrote, loved it. 5/5. Em

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Girl , in poetry , we dont make 1 block 1 paragraph poem , it si bad for the eyes, make the eye run from reading and tired, break it up to patrts,
    and make it rhyming it is a great peace if you work on it , more ,

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Very good poem, deep emotions well done xx