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by Devyn   May 9, 2008


Sitting and waiting
because all she can do is try
waiting and caring
because all she can do is cry
caring and thinking
because she jsut wants to end this lie
thinking and crying
because all she wants to do is die

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  • 15 years ago

    by Samantha

    I really like tthis poem. I can relate to it in alot of ways.Which is good because thats wthat you want to do in poems to make people understand the meaning, and the feeling you put into it better.

    "caring and thinking
    because she just wants to end this lie
    thinking and crying
    because all she wants to do is die"
    That is like a poems I wrot called "Why?'
    read it and tell me if you think so too!
    ~ Samantha ~

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless Watermelon

    Short and sweet, but a bit redundant. i liked it anyway =)

  • 15 years ago

    by mari

    I love this poem!! u are a poet XD!! hey could u read mine pliz?

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