My Big Brother was to young to die

by Crystal   May 11, 2008


My big brother,
Wasn't just a boy you sat by.
He was the one you saw and thought
"He is to young to die."

My big brother,
Wasn't the best player on the team.
But he had the biggest heart and
He is to young to die.

My big brother,
Taught me to play video games.
Together we were Mario & Luigi and
He was to young to die.

My big brother,
Let me sleep with him at night.
When the monsters came out to play
and they even said
He is to young to pass away.

My big brother,
Let me ride in the back seat with him on the bus.
It was amazing to see him smile
Cause He was to young to die.

My big brother was 14,
I was four and we took a ride,
Into a place with many a flashing light.
He was to young to die.

My big brother couldnt breathe anymore.
I never saw him cry,
In the four years I knew him,
I didnt want him to die.

My big brother left,
When I was still little
I'll admit we used to fight but,
I still didnt want him to die.

My big brother was the sun,
The center of my life.
Until came that tragic day,
He just died.

My big brother was gone,
And for months my voice was too.
I didnt have him to talk with,
No one else I choosed.

My big brother was amazing,
But asthma he had.
Like the black plague,
It took his life away.

My big brother is my hero,
That is always true.
Cause he was the one I needed,
To always get me through.

Like a million kids and teens,
All over the earth around.
My big brother,
Was to young to die.

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  • 15 years ago

    by mommytobe

    Great job

  • 15 years ago

    by cory

    This poem really strikes a chord with me cause i lost my little bro.You really captured the beauty of the memories we have of our fallen loved ones.Very sad and very well written. 100/5

    Cory

  • 15 years ago

    by coverd in darkness

    Very amazing poem 5/5 brilliantly written. Thanks for sharing, its good that you seem to have so many memories although you were so young. Fantasic piece of writing.

  • 15 years ago

    by Suicidal Love

    Wow - this is an amazing poem, so well writen.
    i feel like this about my big brother, if he ever died i dont know what i would do
    thanks for sharing this poem 5/5

    suicidal love xx