Emotions

by LyricallyDamaged   May 11, 2008


Life was how it started, yet that was filled with pain.
Death was how it ended and we're the ones to blame.

Poetry had a destiny and it was to hate us all
Soul was so beautiful but couldn't stand tall.
beauty had us smiling although inside she was weak.
and weak was the strongest of them all, but sometimes refused to speak.

heart had love and memories which faded.
terror killed hearts and became the most hated
Trust was quiet, and kept everything inside
Yet hope his best friend I swear had nothing to hide.
Justice was the boss but always wanted to be alone
yet lonely wanted to be loved but that was already gone.
Dream was a believer but hope gave up
life was too confusing to ever give a fuc!

heartless became danger, once danger became cold
and fear built inside us all, as we watched jealousy unfold.
Lust fell in love, but never for the right reasons.
Thats why trust became weak and wanted to stop breathing

Deep had a path that he could never forget
So denial stood by him just to keep him alert.
Envy wanted everything, so we called her needy
Then greed came in the picture and we realized she was just GREEDY

Shame never spoke and we never figured why
So we just thought shame was just a little shy
Pain forced us all to cry, but joy made us forget
Then memories slipped in and we began to dwell in hurt
Thoughtful always listened and cared for everyone but himself
So emotions never knew how thoughtful really felt.

Abuse loved to threat and together they created fear
but strength a good friend helped fear see everything clear
Cry was so giving, so selfish took advantage.
but chance was wise and would never allow it.
Crime was always wrong but who was there to stop em?
Danger was his side kick so no one could Ever Drop em'

Words were the making of poetry
but who spoke nice?
thats why poetry's destiny was to write words that stirred up fights
naive was so gullible and couldn't see the truth
So lies helped her believe and turned her into a fool.

A predestined tragic end, that's what we called fate
and although we tried to hide it we were really afraid
Life was the start of this contract and it's filled with pain.
Death was how it ended and we were the ones to blame
Emotions filled with jealousy, and jealousy filled with hate
no help could ever save us because help came way to late...

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  • 15 years ago

    by H E Losey

    I really enjoy your idea here and your thoughts are uniquely applied.
    You need to check word usage as "to" does not mean the same as "too" but spell check won't catch these errors.
    Your metre gets off in various spots due to over verbage. And perhaps the rhymes could be improved without changing the meaning/thought of the line. I would not want your thoughts to be changed here as they are very good.
    As always these are just opinions: If you wish I could make suggestions.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Awesome job but i got one suggestion. Break it up into stanzas so people won't think it's so long lol. I like the way you thought in this poem though.
    -vino