Dead inside

by CrossCut   May 15, 2008


I'm a ghost in this house
I'm a ghost in the halls
I am no longer me
And now I'm dead inside.

Your a memory I can't erase
The worst part of my past
You caused me so much pain
And now I'm dead inside

Now I live day by day
With no feelings at all
My face is drawn back
And now I'm dead inside

(C)AllisonKay 2008

-This poem just came to me and I am aware it needs editing. help?-

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  • 17 years ago

    by dandelion

    Well...i have 2 say.. i think u used the word "inside" so much.. but its really great.. good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Dont see why you should edit it, its short and to the point and has a good flow, well done xx

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