You still wanted more

by mikayla   May 17, 2008


Thought you were the guy for me,
But all along it seemed I could not see,
The fact that you could notice me,
And that I could somehow be,
Everything you were looking for,
Pity I did not see you still wanted more.

How could I have been so blind?
Thinking that I could be the one on your mind,
Believing that you could actually love me,
When she was where you wanted to be.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tears

    How could I have been so blind?
    Thinking that I could be the one on your mind,
    Believing that you could actually love me,
    When she was where you wanted to be.
    **
    Awesome stanza. We often wish for the attention of that special someone. But he'll come, if the one you like is with another, he wasn't meant to be.
    I loved how you worded the poem and how your emotion flowed so freely.

  • 17 years ago

    by Andy

    Really good poem!
    and i like it where you said
    "seemed I could not see"
    i thought it was quite good :)
    5/5 :)!

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