Grip

by ColourthyCrimson   May 20, 2008


The tighter you squeeze
does your grip increase?
or do your hands just get sweaty
and slip like grease?
Can you feel the blood
running out of your thumbs?
do you feel better this way
Squeezing til your numb?
Have you taken the time
to consider what you've got?
why your squeezing your wrist
and why your blood wont claught?
Why the trip takes so long
or why the drips sound so loud?
Why you can't think in this moment
Why your minds beginning to cloud?
Now you cant let go you say
So you've lost all control?
Has the pain gone away
Now that you've got a strong hold?
Your beginning to fade away
Your bodies growing cold.
All those questions i've asked
With no answers you've supplied
all because you were thoughtless
that night that you died....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Well... Very interesting. Specially the ending. I liked it. It has good flow and nice to read.

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