Silence My Lips With Yours

by BrokenREALiTy   May 20, 2008


"Beautiful" -- the word drips like poisoned acid from your tongue,
Sizzling upon the contact of your lips unto my skin.
(Your mocking sneer teases this curve my mouth has come to form);
Though I could've sworn upon my heart that you had no affect on me,
[Then maybe I could be rid of it and feel no more]

"I love you" -- such an amusing idiom of unimportance,
(Yet you all yearn to hear those words so much)
Such pitiful demeanors-- giving up everything for a little satisfaction:
[How much more dismal will you allow humanity to be?
Clearly any intellect has been ruined beyond repair.]

"I miss you" -- the last of any honest lexis left to singe this earth,
(The only words I ever dream to hear coming from your lips)
A dainty whisper that cloaks my tears with frail breaths,
I inhale -- taking in the last of what remains to be our ardor,
(In fear of losing everything I never wanted,
Because you're the one that gave me life.)

[[But I don't want to die yet; not in your hands...]]
©20080519 Mindy Huang

**Eh, I don't like the ending, but I just wrote whatever came to mind -- so suggestions?

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  • 12 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    This is very, very good...and interesting. I've never read anything like this before...I really like it =D! Keep up the great--no, amazing-- work!!!

    --Hannah

  • 14 years ago

    by Kaila

    Oh my gosh!! Again this poem was fantastic! And is also going into my favorites! And I'm adding you as one of my favorite poets as well. This poem you wrote is harsh and loveable and relatable and just one of those poems everyone concentrates hard on to write but never can they find the right words. Well atleast me anyways:) You have a way of getting deep emotions wedged into your poems! great work
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Excellent poem..in my opinion the ending is perfect.. i dont see any improvement needing done on that..

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  • 14 years ago

    by FlyFF

    Wow your words are strong,perfectly arranged, ive gone through alot and i know how stuff feels but hey you over come !!

  • 14 years ago

    by Goth marionette

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