It was so touching.......

I think this poem speaks a story of a mom weaving dreams for her yet to born child....

But the mother is afraid of If's n But's...

But wat is life without if's n buts...

Life is all about unconditional love n sacrifices...

Wish it has a happy ending...

This poem really touched my heart n will touch the hearts of others who will read this poem...

Marvellous poem.. Keep it up...

Best wishz...

Karan pretty much said everything about this poem, brilliant stuff noor!

This is a very emotional and sensitive writing. It touches the heart for the emotions you've shown.
Very good one.

Well written...

"Should I let you go, should I not..
Do these hands are harsh enough
to build a safe home, more than a sand castle
The Wave of life are sometimes too high
the Strom are arisen from the sea
What if they weep us both to the ocean?
Will the corals tell our story to them?"

^^ i liked this stanza the most... it has more effect then the rest...the questions are raised...the metaphors used...are wonderful..

overall a nice write...

there are some typo's-
'are the strong enough to hold us both'
the=they
'the Strom are arisen from the sea'
strom=storm

This poem reflects a very special type of love yet a fearful yearning for security

This poem has BEAUTIFUL imagery, I really, really, really, like it. Amazing! It's very sad though, and I'm sorry, but you can do it...you may be on a dragonflies wing today, but tomorrow, perhaps a dragon... Good luck!

Nice job here, I could see all the imagery you put in it. Very powerful and heartfelt words here, enjoyed it a lot. NIce job!

If I promise to take care of you
will you also take care of me when I am old
I want to give you a life
born you to this world but I afraid
one day you will hate me
that I was not good enough for you
That I could not be same time your mom and dad..

my favourite stanza...... great work

I love this poem, especially the bit about the corals telling your story, and how its scared and vulnerable and reluctant but there's bravery and willingness at the same time

Beautifully written. Im speechless, that was so touching.

Hey there Noor what a beautiful but sad and melancholy love poem,i enjoyed reading this very much

Really , a beautiful free verse and a creative talent in imagery... god bless you 5/5

'To trust or not to trust........' kinda shakespearian start! so much emotions have gone through this poem!! great use of metaphores made it fantastic!! wow! great poem!