Hysteria

An absolutely marvelous dark piece of poetry. painful but great to read, as i can see how much work you have put into it.

Whispers of torture are all she can hear,
So she grabs the knife from the shelf.
Plunging the blade deep into her side,
She realised she was running from...herself.
^^ ^^ ^^ ^^
i think most people are running from themselves. i know i am. that's probably why this stanza touched me greatly.

a brilliant read and a fantastic write.

5/5

Will read more in due time.

Keep Writing, lovely
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

-Disturbed thoughts echoing in her mind.
She can feel the walls closing in on the dark,
Mixture of blood and dark making her blind.-
it almost brought a chill. loved the image of the walls closing in.
"Scream, little girl, but no one can hear.
I can smell your sweat and fear."

i've readen it a few times, but i can't figure out, -what - whos - speaking

powerful poem
5/5

I did like this poem,it is really more than fantastic..keep it up5/5

I love this poem. ill have to admit the ending was very surprising yet the perfect ending just the same. keep it up!
-lostsoul13-

The poem is nice... 5/5