Black Roses

by Tori   May 22, 2008


Blackened are my thoughts
like the rose in my dreams
My skin shields the light
for the shadows within me
I'm drowning in this quicksilver
This liquid black
My heart cant escape it
There's no turning back

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Fast and stragiht to the point small one but i like it
    you need to plit it into paragraphs and wor more on the rhyming issue:)

    but overall i like the feeling and the topic is new and exotic
    :)
    great work

  • 17 years ago

    by HvN

    I like how you describe it as a liquid, nice :]

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