I think this was a very clever idea, a poem that, when read, it has to be read backwards. like many others, my head hurt afterwards, but it was a nice read, the most different i've read in a long time.
however, there were some parts of the poem that i did not understand, or had small grammar problems (I'm a bit of a grammer/ punctuation freak :] )
"Silenced you keeping is inside something and
Pain a it's and, too me in it got I've
Violence the wants one no, us for better [it[']s] but",
^^ ^^ - it[[']]s - its needs an apostrophe
"Tip serious the on be to now but
Know wanna just really I
[[The chip]], shoulder your off fall it let"
^^ ^^ - [[The chip]] ?? What is that supposed to mean??
"You and me between stay always it'll
[[Share if you, share I'll and]]
Too did he if freak I'd, out find won't she"
^^ ^^ - "Share if you, share I'll and" which reads, "and I'll share, you if share", i think it's supposed to read "and I'll share, if you share",
"This say to courage the had only I if
Paper on down [[write]] of instead
Amiss [[to]] come ever wouldn't feelings our"
^^ ^^ - [[write]] - is supposed to be [[writing]],, take away the [[to]] and it would make more sense.
"feel to come you what is backwards if and
Me to comes it when especially
Deal can we together, alone this in not you're "
^^ ^^ - i love this stanza the most.
The wording wasn't so great, but i could understand what you were saying.
Oh, how unique. It's a clever way to right, but as I read through it, I found grammar mistakes in your poem, and at times, the sentences didn't make complete sense. I feel that you should read over it, and edit it. Keep the style, it's amazing, but it's even harder to comprehend when your sentences don't all make sense. Again, try showing instead of telling, because that's most of what you do in this piece.
WOW! I DIDNT FINISH YOUR POEM BUT I LOVE HOW YOU DID THAT HOLE THING ON READING TI RIGHT TO LEFT I LOVE THAT,,,,, THAT IS REAL TALENT I WAS TOO SHOCKED AT WHAT YOU DID, BUT I WILL READ IT THROUGHLY WHEN I HAVE THE TIME BUT GURL SO FAR I LOVED IT IT WAS NICE FROM WAT I READ SO FAR.
AHAHAH I NEVR SEEN THIS BEFORE
YOU GOT SOME TALENT I CAN TELL... TO WRITE A POEM THAT IS LIKE A MIRRIOR IMAGE... KINDA HARD RIGHT =]
I THINK I WILL RATE YOU ANYWAY JUST CAUSE EHEHEH LOL.