Love is a Carnation

by Lori   May 25, 2008


Love is a carnation
So lovely, strong and rare
Brings so much bright temptation
To every look or stare

Love is a butterfly
So beautiful and bright
They need to fall
Before they fly just right

Love is a new-born baby
The best thing in life
You have to treasure it and hold it safely
To avoid trouble and strife

Well whatever love is
It makes the world go around
And out of all the people I could find
I'm glad it's you I found

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Great poem i really liked this one. keep up the good work ^_^

  • 15 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    "Love is a carnation
    So lovely, strong and rare
    Brings so much bright temptation
    To every look or stare"

    "Love is a butterfly
    So beautiful and bright
    They need to fall
    Before they fly just right"

    -- I dislike the repetition of "bright" in these two stanza's. There are soooo many other words that you could use, and I think you should use a different wordddd.

    "Well whatever love is
    It makes the world go around
    And out of all the people I could find
    I'm glad it's you I found"

    -- Comma after "Well". :D

    *Overall, I loved it! I like the way you described love, because it really is all of those things. It's absolutely amazing. :D

    Five out of five. [5/5]

    ``Briana

  • 15 years ago

    by emiley

    Beautiful!! well done!! 5/5 i would sooo rate higher than that if i could lol. that was wow..

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachelle

    Awww its a lovely pom.
    I love it 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Oh darling,
    this was stunning,
    absolutely gorgeous.
    It was too beautiful for words to describe.
    You really showed what love is
    and the true natural beauty of it.
    It was just absolutely perfect. 100/5