Suicidal Note. [Goodbye World]

by Mackenzie   May 26, 2008


I've wrote this note,
To say goodbye,
To a world of hate,
And a world of lies.

I've wrote this note,
For the people who "cared,"
That when I needed them the most,
Weren't really there.

To my "wonderful" family,
Who put on an act.
"Oh sweetheart, I love you,"
That wasn't a fact.

For my "so-called friends,"
I wasn't good enough for.
Well, I tried my best,
I'm not taking no more.

I'm done with this.
I'm really through.
But there's one last thing,
I must do.

They think they are big,
But I'm so much bigger.
I hold the gun up to my head,
And slowly pull the trigger.

I'll fade away quickly,
The world will be glad.
They never really cared,
And they won't feel bad.

It was my time to die,
Now the world can finally see.
That I hated them as much,
As they hated me.

*this poem is my first about suicide and is completely and is totally fiction. so plz don't get the idea i'm going to go out and kill myself. i just thought this was a good topic to write on... so i did. but plz comment and rate. i'll return the favor. thnxxxx.*

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  • 11 years ago

    by Leanne

    Amazing poem well done.
    flowed really well!!!
    x

  • 12 years ago

    by CrimsonRayne

    This poem was really well written.
    and I have actually took the time to read all of your poems.
    I happened to read this one last.

    Your authors note said it was fiction.
    Just to let you know hunny, people write about what they feel and it affects them and so forth,(and many other reasons) I thought you were a talented writer but I have noticed one thing. the format on most of your poems are either very very similar or exasperately different. your a fake.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    Wow, really deep, and well written, I love it. 6/5 lol.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kelsie Danielle

    I know it wasn't ture i mean how would u write new poemes,but that was a good poem it's very deep

  • 12 years ago

    by Unamed

    Wow...this was really good!..u put so much emotion, i can feel ur emotion even if it is fiction...wow!!..ur a great poet!!..great job!!
    Aly