A Classroom of Symbolism

I love how you used the word thirsty! thats exactly what chalk boards make me think of - thirst for learning in general, and the board's thirst; it seems like there is nothing that could ever be drier than a chalk board. cool ideas =)

This is so beautifully written...

'only to be replaced by new dust-white clouds
that display colorless messages
to impatiently waiting, thirsty animals. '

^^these lines sre so touching...

loved it..

This is so beautifully written...

'only to be replaced by new dust-white clouds
that display colorless messages
to impatiently waiting, thirsty animals. '

^^these lines sre so touching...

loved it..

Well, it's a bit difficult..but the first thing that crosses my mind is that it's about teacher writing things on the blackboard, wiping out again and then write new things for the students to see.

brilliant write!