I'm okay

by she   May 28, 2008


Mind racing
splitting pain
guilt driving me insane
can't sleep
can't breath
can't think straight,
but can't bleed
Cant go back,
cant go forward
to many regrets binding me to the blade,
but through the tears
I'll assure you that
I'm okay

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  • 15 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Nice poem with simple adjectives and few words you created a piece which comprises different emotions, feelings and situation.. like this one. keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    I really liked this poem. It was short, sweet, and to the point. i liked how u were struggling with yourself giving us a view of where ur mind is while u wrote this. great job 5/5
    ~Forever Broken~

  • 15 years ago

    by Janalicious14

    Cant go back,
    cant go forward
    -I like this part, because of this misery you can't do anything but to grab on the blade!

  • 15 years ago

    by StandStill

    Told them all i was fine, they all bought it.
    don't think "i'm ok" will work with me.
    -.-

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