A Puppet

by MyMuse   May 31, 2008


*Ok one thing before i you read and just don't read the whole thing at all I am sorry that my poetry has been bad just please try to enjoy :( but if you have any suggests on helping me please pm me or comment *

I am a puppet that hides behind a mask
I can't complete any task
My master always hated me
But he is he the one that created me

Here comes opening night
But my heart keeps going so tight
I should be ready
But I can't keep my strings steady
And I am just holding onto my teddy

This play is going to be all the same
A beautiful young girl came through the door
But yet she was so poor
Her name was Rose
She never stood in a pose

She always told me
To always be full of glee
My friend you will make mistakes
But here let me tell you just take
Them as they go

Let them blow
Right over your shoulder
You will get older
You will find your life
Just please don't ever take the knife

You will cry
I won't lie
But life might crash and burn
But remember it'll just be another turn

CourtneyxHolland

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  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Really liked this one. i could feel your anxiety and insecurities. great poem.

  • 14 years ago

    by mikaella

    I like this poem its relatable and it's pretty work on the flow it doesn't always have to ryme but iot's pretty anyways can you read and comment some of my poems too

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow i must say tt u're very imaginative...n truely talented poet ... the detailed description and the flow all just falls into proper place... i absolutely love ;)

  • 15 years ago

    by Aish

    I love the message in this-and portrayed through a puppet show is VERY clever.
    Keep writing sweetie!!!

    (oh and another 5)

  • 15 years ago

    by Asher

    This is pretty good,
    I am no expert BUT heres is probley a tip you alrighty know!

    your poems dont have to ryme right after every stanza...
    but other that that this is great,
    a little more pratice and im sure you can take this far in your life!!!!

    ((5))