You to Blame

by Bare My Paradox   Jun 4, 2008


Cant you hear it
the way she screams
suffocating her desires
trading her dreams
Cant you feel it
the way she cries
scars on her wrists
teardrops from her eyes
abruptly she produces a high pitch shout
she's full of dangerous,deadly doubts
who's put to blame
who's head in shame
who made this tragedy awake
Cant you see it
she's killing herself
banging and crying
desperately needs help
Cant you help her
there she lies
putting a end to the disturbing cries
carefully kept in a glass frame
don't show your sympathy
its you to blame

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  • 15 years ago

    by MizzCici

    U did a real good job that was real deep,its good to express ur emotions..keep up the good work!

  • 15 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    Very sad poem and i can relate to it. the flow of the poem was very good and i loved the depth. keep it up

    5/5 loved it

  • 15 years ago

    by real eyes realize real lies

    Wow....thats deep but i like it alot

  • 15 years ago

    by Zara Baines

    Well written, enjoyed it

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