by Lori Jun 5, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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I sit there in my English class |
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Hay love, aah that was so beautiful. I loved it. what a lovely poem which expressed your true emotions of how you feel and gave the reader such beautiful images of love. If this poem is based on what really happens in your English class then i really do hope that things do work out for you!! Over all i loved it. stunning job!!! |
by sweet escape
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I liked the feeling put into the words but i didnt like how the stanzas were dif. lengths...it just through me off. |
by brokengirl
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Cool :P |
by brokengirl
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Very well done.. Great flow.. keep writing =] |
by Debbie
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Nicely written. |