Can't he tell?

by Bettina   Jun 5, 2008


He walks by me,
can't he tell that I can't breath?
He looks at me,
can't he tell that he's the one I wanna be with?
He touches me,
can't he tell that I close me eyes?
He talks to me,
can't he tell that I'm melting faster than ice?
He talks about her,
can't he tell that I'm sad?
He thinks of her,
can't he tell that I'm mad?
He misses her,
can't he tell that I'm crying?
He loves her,
can't he tell that I'm dying?

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  • 15 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    Its a very good poem. dang that sucks. i hate it when u love some1 and they like some1 else and it seems that the guy likes u, and it just gets u really down =[

    ..........I close me eyes? (me should be my btw)

    and this is my fav line:

    He talks to me,
    can't he tell that I'm melting faster than ice?

    ^very good word choice. i havnt seen one like it. so its speacial sorta =]

    5/5 keep writing!

    ~tia

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