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by Paralyzed Jun 9, 2008
Life, society /
I'd never ask for anything,
That wasn't mine to take,
Prideful in my wicked ways,
Sleeping or awake.
I'd never say a single word,
I didn't really mean,
Words, the most important thing,
The truth is so serene.
I'll never cry a single day,
For love that I have lost,
If I held it and still failed,
That lesson is my cost.
I'll never fail to let you know,
The feelings I surmise,
And even when you doubt it all,
You'll see it in my eyes.
I could wish for better things,
Life forever altered,
I'd rather have the things I've earned,
Even when I've faltered.
by Dawn aka Dominique
I swear, you are gonna be famous one day!
you pieces seem so unforced and relaxed and just smooth like it doesn't seemed pushed or defyed by gravity, if you now what i mean
but you have a real good style of writing and never try to write like anyone else or fixed you style to be like anyone else
Stay Talented 5/5
Wow very powerful and skillfully written.Great poem 5/5
by Happy without a reason
This is grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat ^^
thx for sharing
by - Mr. Darcy
A lesson learnt is priceless.
This poem is priceless too. The flow was excellent and the word choice perfect. All this and a good sound moral too!