Comments : Will you be my wife?

  • 14 years ago

    by Meme

    I am sure if u did meet n u proposed with this poem there is no way she wud say no
    am sure she wud defenitly say yes

    amazin one 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Yeah Adel our fren gIrL is wright with wat she said above... u r such a nice gu...

    N to this poem... u have written a gem n it was precious, is precious n will continue to b precious forever like urt glden heart..... ur words r golden to... so r ur poems...

    Keep up the great petic thing going...

    Best wishz... Karan

  • 14 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Thts so beautiful Bro!!!
    I agree wth every1 above n I know my Bro is great n soon u will find a very nice gal :)

    God bless u

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    We will start by two then we can be three
    To have angles is your choice you are free

    Awww Adel, this is so touching! You are going to make a girl a superb husband one day:) I have never met a man as sweet as you, you have such a kind and gentle heart. I am so sorry it had to be broken, but someone will mend it for you, I am positive of that!

    Much love and a super big hug,


  • 14 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice, your purpose style is qute.
    I enjoyed this poem

  • 14 years ago

    by Freedom

    Nice poem and very great rhyme :) my favorite lines are

    You colored my world, you colored my life
    And now I wonder, can you be my wife?

    I am one of those people who don't like to play around
    I want to be your husband so how does it sound?

    thatssss wonderful :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Kevin Askew

    Absolutely lovely...

    *You colored my world, you colored my life
    And now I wonder, can you be my wife?*

    Thats magic ! I hope you can use this poem for someone else very special the near future.


  • 14 years ago

    by MovingOn

    Seriously wow! Very emotional and really heartfelt


  • 14 years ago

    by msluckyone

    Sorry to hear would have been a great love story

  • 14 years ago

    by I Rita Valentine I

    The lord as definately given u a gift adel...
    that'z very sadz to that yall'z love didn't make it this far ;( that'z so sweet of u to make a poem like that for a special person that u hold so dearly! sadly it didn't last :( but great poem the whole thing waz very truly wonderful keep up the great worx peep!

  • 14 years ago

    by Diana Barahona

    this was one of the most cutest poems i have ever read.
    i barely vote and comment on poems but im giving you a...whatever the highest is...i think its a five :]],


  • 14 years ago

    by Nawa

    Wow !! Great poem, written in a beautiful captivating way.
    This poem must be every girl's idea of a perfect proposal.
    Good job. Keep it up.

  • 14 years ago

    by Ash

    Really well written. So simple and yet powerful in every sense.

    "When something is written from the heart, from deep inside where all feelings are found,
    only beauty transmigrates to each soul,
    for those words are precious and build us whole."

    Keep it up! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Lil Ally Kat Xx In love xX

    Man I'm sure when you find her, she will be the most happiest girl in the world!! I know you will find her, your time in happiness will come!! =)

  • 14 years ago

    by Amy

    This is absolutely beautiful! Enjoyed it very much!

  • 14 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Wa wa wa really wonderful. ? This poem bring smile on my face. If some one proposes like this way. None girl can deny.
    at last your note is very sad.
    But great job.

    bahut pyari poem hai.

  • 14 years ago

    by darkest4ever

    I know how hard it is when your eyes find your perfect mate ...... yet it's painful when you know that it's just a dream and didn't come into reality .......'-'
    gr8 poem reminds me of gr8 pain

    thx ever so much

  • 13 years ago

    by NoUr

    but WOW!!
    sooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!!

  • 13 years ago

    by NoUr

    WOW!! this is really so sweeeet..sadly thou

  • 13 years ago

    by Dian PH