I like this poem, you read mine a few years ago and recommended this one but I never read it until now. Good job, very creative and I totally agree that in order to get what you want you must first ask yourself what you want. And in order to ask yourself anything, you must know yourself.
Re-read and it makes a lot more sense now. my foolishness took this as a literal piece not metaphorical. silly me. in that case this is really really inspired to make a metaphor for life itself. great job!!
Mind- BLOWN! wow. just wow. this is so deep. like everyone has questions and the only ones with answers are the answers themselves. i like how you tied food into this too. i didnt fully enderstand it and i hope that you would msg me with a better understanding, but this was awesome. your a very leveled writer able to cover many subjects perfectly with great insight. great job man!
8 years ago
Everything starts with a question, if we don't think and wonder then how are we supposed to know more? So just "talk" to "yourself" but not exactly to yourself. Ask and ask there is nothing to lose with that. The answers will come up because there is an answer to everything, if it seems like there is not one. It might just be hidden but we need to dig it so we can find it. There is a saying : "help yourself, that i will help you" So come up with questions and "I" will give the answers to you" but we have to look for them.. he won't tell us in person.