by Kevin Askew Jun 13, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
new love
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Waiting for the clock to tick |
by Sylvia
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When the one you love is away or a far distance from you, minutes seem like hours, etc., until they return. The wait is long and hard but worth it. Well done. |
by dora
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Aww your poem was so sweet. it was beautifully worded. very touching 5/5 =) |
by Josh
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Nice write. In the second stanza, second line I'm not quite sure if you meant my eyes "swell" up with tears or how it is right now which is my eyes "well" up with tears. I know I come across typos in my writing countless amounts of times. |
by Jillian
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Oh my goodness that is like exactly how i feel1!!! thta was such an amazing poem! |
by Sora
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Nicee work with this one!! excellent job, and i love the title of this poem. keep up the good work =] |