Darkness (I Remain)

by KeyxMashingxParody   Jun 15, 2008


Why,
Do you,
Always,
Blame me,
For everything,
That goes,
Wrong.
You,
And your pain,
Always...
You always,
Point the finger,
At my heart.
Cursing,
Only,
Makes everything,
Worse.
You yell,
I,
Remain silent.
You draw,
Back your fist,
I,
Remain still.
You scream,
At me,
Getting,
In my face.
I,
Remain,
Staring,
In your eyes.
You try,
To get,
To me,
In my head,
My thoughts,
Remain,
Darkness.
This moment,
You've made,
Yet another,
Mistake,
Of mine.
You walk,
Away.
I,
Remain,
Darkness.

You may think the category is wrong, but it's my life...

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  • 15 years ago

    by Empathy

    I think I may have even liked this poem even better if you would have expanded what you said, but do not worry! I love the poem nonetheless! I think you came across very well with your emotions and your theme came clearly. Nice work.

  • 15 years ago

    by TormentedSoul

    Wow i really liked the poem!! the was great, the emotions expressed gave it a pretty good visual, and there are parts i can relate to in the poem. 5/5