Suicide

by greenenvy   Jun 19, 2008


The night comes but still she lays awake,
Feeling of no feelings,
Her mind a mass of wrong doings,
Like a swarm of bees engulfing her very being,

Blood drips slowly from finger to floor,
Ruby red - sticky - warm,
Her mind goes blank now,
A feeling of calm,

No need to worry just drift away,
But then a flicker of light inside her soul,
No! she cannot go!
she fights but does not move,
Too late....sweet dreams.

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  • 17 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    It sad and dark from being and end. but mostly sad awesome. keep writng

  • 17 years ago

    by Leigh

    You use metaphors well. This poem flows brilliantly, I enjoyed reading it, even though the content was so dark - now that takes talent on your part. Well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Inocente

    Ou i like this very creppy and wow thats all i have to say