Raining

by InvisiblyHeartless   Jun 21, 2008


The single tear caresses my cheek
Unaware of the pain it brings
A salty drop starts the fall
Pressure pushes them all out
Revealing the human emotion i feel
Lonely and weary, the journey began
It seems to never end or rest
And one single drop of water
Crashes the party, raining pain

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  • 15 years ago

    by XXXrusted silverXXXwas nvr good enough to be goldXXX

    I reallt like this poem! Normally I'm not into poems that don't have alot of rhyme...but the emotions in the poem make up for it. My favorite parts are the first two lines and the last three. The only part I don't like is where it says human emotion...i feel like the word human doesn't really belong but that's just my opinion. Overall It's good. :)
    Much love
    Jonda Beth

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very sad write...
    each line reflects the pain and remorse in your heart..
    nicely written but I found it too short(but thats jus my opinion)

    overall a nice read...

    keep writing...

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I love this poem, but it could use more explaining and such. It was based off a pretty simple topic if you ask me. But, that's maybe just me liking longer poems! Great work though, 5/5.

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