Fate

by Hopelessly Devoted to You   Jun 22, 2008


Soon the clash begins,
at the line of war,
pin point determination,
from the hate it tore.

Unaware the enemy sits,
relaxing and content,
not realizing the coming danger,
that something is going to end.

Tolerance had crossed the line,
that rope of tense is about to snap,
and the peace has left,
there's no going back.

Once the war begins,
that was set off by hate,
it can't be stopped,
with peace gone it's fate.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    This is a moving poem.
    "From the hate it tore" is a very visual line, it's imaginitive.
    5/5 hun :]

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    This was a very deep and powerful poem.
    you did a wonderful job with this one.
    loved it.
    keep up the nice work.