A Room With A View

Resplendent Write, Wonderful Rachel!!!

Rachel,

Poetry is great and springs up from the most unlikely places, imagery for instance. A picture paints a thousand words, but best of all when they are crafted such as yours here.

I love the sapphire reference and the passage of time, form sunset to moon rise, possibly a reference to the enduring love given freely by a mother.

Great piece :)

Michael

I find my poems lack description
which is why i particually admire this one

it really painted a picture with words
made me feel relaxed

thankyou xx

"From my room with a view I see
Sapphire waves of coming tide
Wispy clouds floating by
As day will soon subside"
`I loved how you started it out like you were actually looking out a window, because it puts the reader in your exact position and it makes me picture this so perfectly. This description was amazing. I couldn't have worded it better than you did. The words that you used to describe this view was amazing. So vivid!

Overall, such a beautiful write. One that you could picture so vividly, and when you look at the picture it's exactly what I imagined in my mind. Wonderfully written. This poem was amazing, you definatly have your way with words! 5/5

I love nature poems, but it's not often I find one I actually enjoy. This one on the other hand was amazing, such a deep meaning and the words were very powerful. Mother nature will always be there...excellent job 5/5