Ice

by Danielle   Jun 1, 2004


It was too cold that morning
i was frozen like stone
it was inside of me
something in my very bones

it was chilly that afternoon
i was shaken all around
it was inside of me
something not to be found

it was cool that evening
i was stiff from the snow
it was inside of me
something no one knows

it was bitter that night
i was nipped by the windy spice
it was inside of me
something cold as ice

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  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle

    "it" is an emotion that can't really be described...so the whole poem was based on trying to descover a word close enough to describe it and the closest thing I could think of was "ice"....hence the poem...lol I hope that explains it a little better

  • 19 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    I thought it was very well written, maybe if you told what "it" was would make it a little bit better, but thats just my opinion. It was great anyway

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