The Four Things That I Hate

by TRAGiC BEAUTY   Jul 2, 2008


There's twelve things that I truly love
About the way you act and how you are
Then there's things I hate about you
And I can think of about four

I love the way your hair hits your shoulders
And the way you move when you walk
I could constantly sit and smell your cologne
And listen for hours while you talk

I love the way you speak your mind
And the way you laugh at my jokes
I love how you kiss me a million times
And the way my hair, you stroke

I could go on and on about your smile
And the way your eyes light up the world
I love the way you hold my waist
And how you say "She's my girl.."

But there's a couple things I cannot stand
About the way that you act
And I can name four off the top of my head
And all of these are fact

You constantly tell me you love her too
And you call me names I'd rather not hear
You yell at me like I'm one of your 'bros'
And I hate the way you cause my tears

There may be a couple things I hate
But the good overrule the bad
I love you baby, you know that
And you're the best thing that I have

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  • 15 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Awwww, this is cute. I haven't seen your poems in awhile. Hello! I like how you said the good over rule the bad because everyone has those bad parts in relationships. Good job! =]

  • 15 years ago

    by thalia

    Aww...this is such a great poem!!!
    Very good!!!
    Awesome!!!