ITS NOT A POEM...BUT A SAD STORY(being fixed)
by xXbrandyXx Jul 6, 2008
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"-----CRIES...WHILE SAYING THIS-----gosh...I'm breaking and i cant stop it...I dont know what to do anymore....I'm shutting people out who i shouldn't shut out.......every night i cry....till i cant even breathe......i hate myself....all i want to do is scream so loud that i bust my lungs.....i hate being here...i wanna leave....i wanna look forward to waking up in the morning....not wishing....that it would be my last breath....i wanna feel love....to touch it....i wanna be able to believe".AND ALL YOU SAY------alright then------- |
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15 years ago
by Mister 47
Tooo much cuts , in the pictures here, her are geting fragment of waht you feel
i think too short for a story to speak at loud for you even we can understand the feelings,
you say it is not a poem , but i beleve, feelings like this , that you do
you can easly make it one , if you want to speak the poem way the words will sjtu come out in their places
over all i will not vote now ,
i hope you do somthing more with it ,
take it out reform it and put it back
you felt bad , and we understadn , now ti si time to intesify this feeling and put it in it right content
*PS:nwo you can love me for ever and ever * lol -
15 years ago
Well i would say that this is a poem and a very good, has alot of feeling in it. really love it .
Keep writing-
