I'm Lonely
by H E Losey Jul 7, 2008
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Mornings come and the dawn finds me |
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15 years ago
Well expressed, you stated your feelings very clearly in this poem, and I really enjoyed it:
"Sleep pulls and overcomes me
Dreams of your love, and yet
I'm lonely"
Very powerful last stanza, the word usage is just beautiful, nice job! -
15 years ago
This was a sad poem but you can clearly see how the author is feeling at the moment [lonely], which is what I would look for in a poem. Great write, 5/5.
