Yeah its short but i really like it!
Gets the message across and i think that the length was perfect for this poem in particular!
the repetition is good too.

For being so short, this is SUPER strong, Julia. It's actually very beautiful, the two main stanzas kind of highlight how each metaphor works. it's a great job hon.

Wow its not like anything you have been writing. but it is great

Another nice poem, julia. keep it up!

This is really good. i like short.

Gr8 poem ;)

I like this one. May be short, but it is also extremely deep and I find it very packed with emotion. Great write 5/5

I like this poem. very nice :)

Short but awsome...I liked it alot...

Stanza..... its short. but i love it.....
a good poem.... i had a good read...=)