This is breathtaking, utterly amazing. I love the combination of languages within the poem.
You created flawless rhythm and flow from the beginning to the end, and the whole atmosphere of this piece is simply remarkable. This is one of the most intense and the most beautiful love poems I've read in a while.
I like the ending a lot, too, it's so effective.
I adored this piece. I really did. The emotions which you portrayed were definitly deep and powerful. They latched onto my heart and wouldn't let go. Only few love poems have the ability to do this because I believe it is very hard to write a love poem when it's so hard to express your feelings to a person.
I loved the spanish. It was definitly a unique touch. It created a warmth over the atmosphere. I could tell that this poem was written from the heart. It was amazing.
To me this was as perfect as something could be. Thanks for the enjoyable read this morning.