What you do

by Aure   Jul 10, 2008


I look into your eyes
It's like making love
On top of broken glass

When my knee touches your leg
I accidentally blush
Like needles were stuck in my cheeks

When I hear your voice's sound
My heart jumps wildly round
In a much to tiny space

Oh painful delight
Desire that comes with despair

As you were sitting next to me
You never seemed so far away

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  • 13 years ago

    by DeafBeats

    I felt like these lines were the source of flow and feelings ...

    It's like making love
    On top of broken glass
    ^^^
    Amazing comparison. I know exactly what you mean. So good it hurts.

    Oh painful delight
    Desire that comes with despair
    ^^^
    This is also beautiful. Bitter sweet.

    As you were sitting next to me
    You never seemed so far away
    ^^^
    Could never be close enough to someone you care about - and realization that also hurts like a bugger

    This poem was almost perfect. When something is more than enough it would be "too" instead of "to"

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